2014年1月4日星期六

5 mins film's script --- take away

EXT. Cemetery- DAY
There are 3 people standing before a tombstone, Roy has some distance with Susie and Ren, Susie is crying and Ren is hugging her.
Ren put the flowers in front of the tombstone. After that he takes Susie away, and Roy stays a while and leaves.
EXT. street- night
Ren receives a phone call. And he glances his watch.
Ren
Hello?
Ren
What? OK, I get it.
INt. Susies house- night
Susie is drinking, Roy tries to stop her, and he grab the bottle from Susie. Susie begins to cry. Ren breaks the door in and come to pull Susie from ground on the bed. And then Susie hugs Ren. Roy does not know what to do, just look around and he finds out a card which includes a number.
Roy
Don't drink any more, please.
susie
Give me!
EXT. STREET- day
Roy is out from a gabage, and he is thinking beside the road. At that time, he sees Susie and Ren is coming together, and they are happy chatting. Roy is hiding and looking.
int. restaurant- night
Roy calls Susie have dinner with Ren in the restaurant where Ren is working. Ren goes out for deliver take-away. Roy asks Susie about the day when Lee died how the car used. Susie is stunned and begin to recall.
Roy
Before the day Lee died, is there anyone used this car?
SUSIE
eh..In that day
INT. RESTAURANT- NIGHT
(recall)Lee and Susie went into the restaurant to call Ren went out for dinner. They sit in the chair for waiting. Susie was not well and she went to the toilet. When she came back, Ren received a order, so he asks Lee and Susie to wait another times. Lee took out his key and gave it to Ren so that he could deliver fast. Susie was angry and Lee tried to comfort her.
Lee
Hi,Ren. It it time for dinner.
Ren
Wait a minite.
Lee
Let us take a seat
SUSIE
I am not feeling good, could I go to the toilet?
Lee
All right.
SUSIE
I am so hungry. When shall we have dinner?!!!
Lee
Are you ok? Is there something wrong with you?
SUSIE
Nothing but so hungry!
Ren
I am very sorry for having another order to deliver
Lee
What the hell! Why let us waiting for you so long!
Ren
I am very sorry, it is the last one.
LEE
OK...Let me think. You can take my car, here is the key. Coming soon!
Ren
OK, thanks!
INT. RESTAURANT- NIGHT
Ren is coming back with the order. He complains that it is the second time with the empty order. He speaks to Roy if he knows last time the same situation. They begin to talk. Susie feels uncomfortable, and she begins to have the bill, but they don't notice her.And then Roy feels there is something wrong with Susie. He don't believed her.
Ren
Empty order again!
Roy
What's up?
Ren
Do you remember last time you and Lee come to see me? It is the first time empty order appears.
Roy
Speak more.
SUSIE
I am full. Do you want to leave?
(chating)
INT. RESTAURANT's toilet- NIGHT

(recall)Susie pressed the phone button. There was a order coming from the machine.

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