First practice about script

On Monday's script class, we have a practice. I choose the first one: A couple have had an argument and only one of them wants to make up.

Here is mine:
In a room, the TV was open which was displaying news. The couple were sitting on a sofa. The man was towards to woman, whereas the woman was towards to other side. Man tried to put his hand on her shoulder but he failed because the woman interrupted him. The man tried to explain, however, at that moment the woman was throwing a cup and it broke. The man was angry and he began to hit the woman's face when the electricity was cut off at that time. They were scared and the woman began to cry. The man found the flashlight and came to light the room. Finally the woman was calm down and began to listen his explain.